I really liked the way that you associated characters' feelings and mindset with each of the different places, especially when the appearance contradicted the true nature of the place. It was kind of hard to see how your scenes connected though; it would have helped to hear about your MOWW in more depth. Great job!
I like your idea that moments of happiness are waiting to shatter. Your example of Sethe and her daughters at the ice rink supports that idea well. I agree with you that they are frozen in time at the moment and that it is very fragile.
I appreciate the meddling of the 3 locations in making your MOWW. I especially like your description of the the ice and their moment being "frozen in time." It brings home how fleeting and precious their happiness is.
I like how you picked up on them calling it cold during the summer, and analyzed the different meanings of cold
ReplyDeleteI like how you picked up on them calling it cold during the summer, and analyzed the different meanings of cold
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way that you associated characters' feelings and mindset with each of the different places, especially when the appearance contradicted the true nature of the place. It was kind of hard to see how your scenes connected though; it would have helped to hear about your MOWW in more depth. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI like your idea that moments of happiness are waiting to shatter. Your example of Sethe and her daughters at the ice rink supports that idea well. I agree with you that they are frozen in time at the moment and that it is very fragile.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you went in depth with your analysis of different locations, but your MOWW could be more specific! Nice Job! :)
ReplyDeleteI appreciate the meddling of the 3 locations in making your MOWW. I especially like your description of the the ice and their moment being "frozen in time." It brings home how fleeting and precious their happiness is.
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